英文作文-９２１地震

What
was
I
doing
when
the
９２１
earthquake

happened?
In
９２１
earthquake,
I
and
my
girlfriend
are
together.
We
are
on

the
bed,
doing
love.
I
am
up,
and
she
is
down.
So
we
are
up
and
down,
up
and

down
......
together.
The
earthquake
is
more
and
more
big,
and
we
are
more

and
more
excited.
Though
my
girlfriend
says
no,no
......
I
know
her
heart

say
yes,yes......
At
last,
we
are
into
high
潮
together.
That
day,
we
are

the
happiest
a
day.
I
hope
the
last
time
is
fast
a
little

come.
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贊助商連結

嗯.是該零分.

這是..什麼爛文章..
潮還打中文@@

是 make love 不是 do love 。

這真有其事嗎？
竟然把地震當成情趣工具......-_-||

有些文法錯誤........